A major part of making good literary observations is noticing what the author is emphasizing.
How do you emphasize something in your writing?
How do you emphasize something when you are sending a text message?
The biblical authors were limited in how they could emphasize something because they didn’t have access to all the methods we use today.
How would you emphasize something without using bold print, italics, underlines, exclamation points and all caps?
One of the primary ways biblical authors emphasized something was by repeating it. That means when we read the Bible we have to pay special attention to repeated words and phrases.
Read Genesis 1 below carefully then highlight the repetition.
[Note to teachers: to have students find the repeated words and phrases in a passage, print out the passage by using biblegateway.com in whatever translation you want to use, then ask students to highlight the same word or phrase in the same way each time it appears. For example, they could draw a rectangle around the word light each time it appears and a circle around the word water each time it appears, or they could use different colors. Just make sure they are consistent by using the same color or symbol each time that word or phrase appears. Of course, if students have computers, this type of assignment can be done without paper.]
Genesis 1
In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth. 2 Now the earth was formless and empty, darkness was over the surface of the deep, and the Spirit of God was hovering over the waters.
3 And God said, “Let there be light,” and there was light. 4 God saw that the light was good, and he separated the light from the darkness. 5 God called the light “day,” and the darkness he called “night.” And there was evening, and there was morning—the first day.
6 And God said, “Let there be a vault between the waters to separate water from water.” 7 So God made the vault and separated the water under the vault from the water above it. And it was so. 8 God called the vault “sky.” And there was evening, and there was morning—the second day.
9 And God said, “Let the water under the sky be gathered to one place, and let dry ground appear.” And it was so. 10 God called the dry ground “land,” and the gathered waters he called “seas.” And God saw that it was good.
11 Then God said, “Let the land produce vegetation: seed-bearing plants and trees on the land that bear fruit with seed in it, according to their various kinds.” And it was so. 12 The land produced vegetation: plants bearing seed according to their kinds and trees bearing fruit with seed in it according to their kinds. And God saw that it was good. 13 And there was evening, and there was morning—the third day.
14 And God said, “Let there be lights in the vault of the sky to separate the day from the night, and let them serve as signs to mark sacred times, and days and years, 15 and let them be lights in the vault of the sky to give light on the earth.” And it was so. 16 God made two great lights—the greater light to govern the day and the lesser light to govern the night. He also made the stars. 17 God set them in the vault of the sky to give light on the earth, 18 to govern the day and the night, and to separate light from darkness. And God saw that it was good. 19 And there was evening, and there was morning—the fourth day.
20 And God said, “Let the water teem with living creatures, and let birds fly above the earth across the vault of the sky.” 21 So God created the great creatures of the sea and every living thing with which the water teems and that moves about in it, according to their kinds, and every winged bird according to its kind. And God saw that it was good. 22 God blessed them and said, “Be fruitful and increase in number and fill the water in the seas, and let the birds increase on the earth.” 23 And there was evening, and there was morning—the fifth day.
24 And God said, “Let the land produce living creatures according to their kinds: the livestock, the creatures that move along the ground, and the wild animals, each according to its kind.” And it was so. 25 God made the wild animals according to their kinds, the livestock according to their kinds, and all the creatures that move along the ground according to their kinds. And God saw that it was good.
26 Then God said, “Let us make mankind in our image, in our likeness, so that they may rule over the fish in the sea and the birds in the sky, over the livestock and all the wild animals,[a] and over all the creatures that move along the ground.”
27 So God created mankind in his own image,
in the image of God he created them;
male and female he created them.
28 God blessed them and said to them, “Be fruitful and increase in number; fill the earth and subdue it. Rule over the fish in the sea and the birds in the sky and over every living creature that moves on the ground.”
29 Then God said, “I give you every seed-bearing plant on the face of the whole earth and every tree that has fruit with seed in it. They will be yours for food. 30 And to all the beasts of the earth and all the birds in the sky and all the creatures that move along the ground—everything that has the breath of life in it—I give every green plant for food.” And it was so.
31 God saw all that he had made, and it was very good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the sixth day. (NIV)
Footnotes:
a. Genesis 1:26 Probable reading of the original Hebrew text (see Syriac); Masoretic Text the earth
Repetition in Genesis 1
- God/he/him (~ 30x)
- “And God said” (vv. 3, 6, 9, 14, 20, 24) begins each day. “Then God said” (vv. 11, 26, 29). “God blessed them and said” (v. 28). Verse 22 actually contains a different form of the verb, which most English translations render as “saying.” (See the list of English translations for verse 22 here.) This gives us a total of ten references to “God said” in Genesis 1. Many have noted a connection between these ten words and the Ten Commandments: God’s ten words started the world and God’s ten commands ordered the way his people should live.
- God created/made
- God called
- God saw that it was good (and very good)
- God blessed
- Evening and morning
- And it was so
- According to their kinds
- Let there/them
- Separate(d)
- Light
- Darkness
- Vault
Notice the repeated pattern used to describe the days of creation.
- “And God said”
- “Let there be”
- “And it was so”
- “And God saw that it was good”
- “And there was evening and there was morning”
For more lessons on Genesis 1 see this post.
After graduating from Gordon-Conwell Theological Seminary, I served as a high school Bible teacher in Asia. I enjoy traveling, writing, and playing the drums. My latest book focuses on Paul’s work as a tentmaker and what it means for today.
I think the Genesis 1 and 2 have a very deep unknown meaning. Would you be willing to discuss? I would be willing to call you on cell phone. If the torah is the same in genesis, could the verses be duplicated so that each priest line could have their sentences included? is that why the verses are duplicated but were written differently?
how we can explain the repetition of “good” in the Christian story of the Creation?
That means that EVERYTHING God created is GOOD.. none of it is “bad” everything in this world God created & it is all good! Jesus said it isn’t what goes in a man that defiles him, it’s what comes out of a man that defiles him.. everything is good but if you or everyone around you has a perspective that it’s bad, that’s when you’re defiled..
Why is verse 29 omitted from the count of ten acts of speech? It seems that the phrase “God said” appears eleven times in this story, not ten, which bothers me because I do think there is a significant connection between the “ten” acts of speech here and the ten commandments, as well as other stories where sets of ten are highlighted to indicate God at work. Is verse 29 included with verse 28 as one act of speech, resulting in ten?
Cody, you are right that verse 29 should be included. That was an oversight on my part. Many still only count ten “God saids.” Please see my revised comment in the post.
That is a very helpful clue to that pattern, thank you!